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need a native speaker to correct my conte TY !

#7046

“its a bloody marvellou´s time to be alive,
an age of invention,so many clever bloodstreams bring up impossible machines,
saulting away more gold than queen victoria has self but none of there shilings ,
ever makes it into their pocket to poor devil whos bloody spilted,
building this glory´s empire, the working class needs walk through life aware of the machine thats drive them,
let´s wake them up shall we? ”

please help me with my mistakes, thank you !

El3.nd.3r a.k.a r3chtschaff3n

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#7051

Not sure what you mean by clever bloodstreams, and I think saulting was supposed to be squandering.
Hope it helps, and that some other REAL native speaker could propose something better 😀

“It’s a bloody marvelous time to be alive.<br>
An age of invention, so many clever ?bloodstreams? bring up impossible machines,<br>
squandering away more gold than queen victoria has herself. But none of their shillings<br>
ever make it into their pockets, the poor devil whose blood is spilled<br>
building this glorious empire. The working class needs to walk through life aware of the machines that drive them.<br>
Let´s wake them up shall we? ”

please help me with my mistakes, thank you !

El3.nd.3r a.k.a r3chtschaff3n

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#7052

ty that helped me

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